Kiara Simons

[kiara]

Character's Name; Kiara Simons
Name you want to be called; Kiara
Character’s Nickname(s); Blue/ Rage
Race; Lycan
Grade; 9th
Age; 15
Birthday; 11/1/92
History; Unknown to her prestigious parents, they adopted a lycan child, raised her. But something was missing from their new daughter, at first they though she was mentally retarded. She never payed attention in class, and had a tendency to run off into the woods. She could it seemed look right through you. Very quiet the only person she talked to regularly being Andy. . . Mental right. . . Different is more like it. . . But what sent her spiraling downward into what she is today would be the death of her love. . . Andy was a lycan (witch tells a lot). Seeing how all lycans have to keep their secret to themselves, kiara never found out, but some one did and they got together a hunting party wile he was out running.

Worst of all though was that Andy's body (in wolf form) was taken to her house to be mounted. She could smell that it was her Andy, and that he was dead, now and forever.

Important Relationships; Andy Simons
Mannerisms; says 'Dianna' in place of 'god'
Fears/Dislikes; fears white rooms that are brightly lit, peppy people,
Likes; dusk, Christina Dodd novels, Art, Music
Hobbies; Swimming, Drawing, Hiking in the Forest
Music; Three Doors Down, Atreyu, Soul Asylum, Hinder, Kamelot
Appearance; 4 intentional heart shaped scars. one on lower left for-arm, in the webbing between pointer finger and thumbs. Another on the left shoulder. highth is about 5'4 wight approx. 115. . .
Personality; insightful, strong willed, quiet.
Sample RP intro;

Running, Thinking, Smelling, Running more. . .
Dark pads hitting rain softened ground. The worlds colors running together and blurring at the seams. The world a blur, she herself a blur to the world. Everything toppling around her, the only clear thing is the path ahead and the need to run away, away from it all.

' Hes dead, I'll never see him ever. . . Gone. . . Dead. . . Forever. . '

The voice replaying in her head, just over and over, sometimes whispering, sometimes screaming. Wrong, all of it was wrong, or was it right? she had got to relaxed, her guard was down. Now Andy was dead and it was her fault. It was all her fault. . . She should have done something more, showed herself to him. . . Something! Anything! But there was nothing she coud do now or have done then. . .

A town? yes there was one comeing up, some miles off but close and coming up. . . she had all she would need to make a new life in the pack tied to her back. Yes the horrible heavy pack that keept her from running faster, was going to be of some use.

Celebrity Play by;
Evenessence

[kiara]

Here she is

[Jack Lupus]

This needs some work. PM me and I'll tell you what to fix.

[Jack Lupus]

If I don’t approve your audition, it’s not because my standards are high. It’s because your writing is at an unacceptably low level.

Confusing which and witch, for example is a red flag that you don’t belong here. And I’m pretty sure if you’d been using spell check it would have caught “highth” and “wight” (which are correctly spelt height and weight, if you were curious). This forum is literate, and unless you want to look like a moron and not get accepted, I expect your audition to be as well.

Getting an attitude is a sure fire way to get your ass deleted. And I’m pretty sure it’s spelt “hasta”.

[Kiara]

well if you want to be an asshole, then you know what just delete my post and go on your little happy f**k**g do-da-day. . . and you can say it hasta is the name of my dog dipshit, so i say osta. . . so go ram a stick up you ass and sit on it...